2009
09.30
09.30
Learning to live with a person you see slumber – alone – un-alive,
learning to live with a person who neither cares for others nor himself,
is merely learning why some float along while others cut their path,
why some drift while others drive,
why some are victims while others fight,
why some excuse while others account,
why some exist while others weary – together – enter rest.
This is a cool poem! Is it about laziness and/or carelessness? It seems like while the lazy float through life merely existing, those who labor may exhaust themselves during life, but eventually find rest. Is this what you were thinking when you wrote this poem??
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Hi,
Thanks for reviewing this post entitled “slumber.” I’m interested in hearing your thoughts about this poem.
Regards,
Matt
Yeah…I really like that.